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Chapter 16 Story

Jerry gave me the plot of the story he wants to create. I wrote it down the laptop. So this time he wants

to make a fantasy, action, Romantic movie, during the pre-hispanic era. I think it's cool the clothing will

be interesting, He wants Rose and Tom again to play the lead roles.

So they are on enemy tribes. They felt physical attraction the moment they saw each other so it's a

puzzle how they will end up together.

I think it's cool I just need to put an interesting part to support the plot lines. The part where the

audience will surely look forward. Kissing scenes, fight scenes and stuff.

Jerry wants to start the story where they felt hate first before the attraction. He believes it will increase

the interest of the audience that way. I'm just here to write it. It is Jerry's story so it's his call.

I want somebody to die in the ending. I want it to be a tragic ending. He said.

Don't you think it's too much? I love happy endings.

I want it to be tragic so they will not forget the story even the last part.

You're so mean Jerry, you're playing with the emotions of your audience too much.

I know that's why we always get blockbusters because of my taste.

Alright, you're the boss! I will be giving a quirky love story you trashed out to my brother anyway, you

don't like them.

Go ahead.

You are not angry?

For what?

For having a competitor.

Come on Tara, They are newbies, they can't compete with me yet.

I know, but you know. I just wanna make sure you won't feel bad towards me coz you know I love you

right.

Of course, I will never be angry at you, you are my treasure.Original from NôvelDrama.Org.